I am the taunts of failure
the echoes of death
I am the breaking of hope
the words of a last breath
I am the cruelty of fate
the loss of a friend
I am the road untaken
the path to an end
I am the days of despair
the empty droughts of a desert
I am the bird without wings
the loneliness of hurt
I am the sad farewell
the sorrow in goodbye
I am the pain of a wound
the salt in tearing eyes
I am the ruins of a canvas
the sound of fading colors
I am the wreckage of storms
the parting of old lovers
I am the closing of doors
the breaking of dreams
I am the silence of helplessness
I am the wails of grief
I am everything unpleasant
everything disliked
I am poison
venom
I am the uncured
but however I am
Just promise me
I’m yours.
I’m not mine, but can I be yours?
Poetry from: Curing My Venom
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Superlative piece. Enjoyed reading it over and over again
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Glad you liked it 🙂
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I love how this piece slowly built its way to that simple but chilling last line. Very well done! 😀
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Thank you 🙂
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You’re very welcome! 😀
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We all wish that someone somewhere will accept the flawed version of us. This is beautiful ❤
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Thanks love ❤
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😊
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Wow – absolutely gorgeous- so many shades of love and defiant – but at last you are someone’s love
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True 🙂
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🌸😊
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Reblogged this on johncoyote and commented:
Amazing poetry by a talented writer.
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Thank you so much ❤
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I enjoyed the movement and the strength of the words. A amazing poem.
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Thank you 🙂
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You are welcome.
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Stupendous! Marvelling at every word!!
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Glad you liked it 🙂
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Powerfully written with a perfect finale.
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Thank you 💚💚
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Amazing!!
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It’s beautiful, my friend…♥️
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