I’m doubting myself again
and I don’t know what to do
do I give up or do I pull myself through?
But the days are getting darker
and I don’t see the light
what’s the point of this crusade
when I can’t even fight?
The journey seems too long
and the mountains are too high
I’m sinking to the ground
yet I’m aiming for the sky.
I have wounds as thick as oceans
and bruises as dark as coal
how do I move ahead
when I don’t know where to go.
I don’t have a shield
or a cover above my head
I’m breathing and wheezing
but something in me is dead.
Don’t give up. Not now not ever.
remember why you held on for so long
doubt will only break you
but my love, I know you’re very strong.
Your wounds may be many
and you may be feeling down
but why are you afraid of falling
when you’ve risen from the ground.
Take a break
inhale. Victory is yours to kiss
I believe in you
I know you can do this.
Poetry book: Curing My Venom
Beaut!!! 🌺🌺🌺🌺🌺
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Glad you liked it 😊
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Amazing writing. 👏
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Thank you 💚
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Welcome 🙂
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Goosebumps! So relatable. Is this you in the photo?
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Thank you 🙌 yep that’s me!
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Beautiful. 😊
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Thank you 🙌
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This is amazing wordplay, thank you for this!
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Glad you liked it 🙌
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I love this, it’s beautiful!
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Thank you 🙌
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You wrote this, yeah?
I’m glad now I’m okay, and grateful I didn’t mess up when was so sure I would. Every day is a new day.
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Love your spirit! Yeah I wrote it a long time ago… never posted it
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lovely words and glad that it has hope at the end! I was scared reading the first lines lol
Keep it up my friend ^_^
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Yeah… I try to end my post with positivity… there’s plenty of negativity in the world! Dont wanna add any more negativity!
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Yes, please stay always positive 😀💐
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Trying to 🙌
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Love everything about your poetry. It’s flow, wordplay and the subjects you deal with. I am inspired to write something after going through this poem of yours. You r a rare talent
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That’s means a lot! Thank you so much for reading..
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I love that you finished the last part with a promise of assurance and hope! Beautiful ❤️
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I always try to do that! The world is already filled with negativity… I dont wanna add any more…
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It’s a good thing
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Wonderful 😊
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Thank you🙌
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Pleasure💜😊
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Beautiful and Inspiring! 😊
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Thank you 😊
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“The journey seems too long
and the mountains are too high
I’m sinking to the ground
yet I’m aiming for the sky.”
These lines touched my soul……
every writeup of yours relates to me and my life so well!!
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Thanks Kundan 👍
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Great 💐
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